All righty! Here's the last scene of "track 2" of BPM; Roxy's phone call to Hannah. This scene above all others got the most discussion from my beta-readers, who either loved or hated how Roxy acts in this scene. At first I was worried that this meant I had screwed up, but them it became apparent that people were invested enough in Roxy to really care if she was acting like a jerk. Above all, I wanted to make sure she acted like a human; flawed, hopeful and prone to mistakes, even if her heart is in the right place. What are your thoughts?
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